Wednesday, 27 March 2013
FINAL TRAILER
Final draft trailer and focus group
We felt that the music was too slow and not exciting to keep the audience on the edge therefore decided to import a file that we discovered on the internet where the music raises at the point of suspense.
Own trailer
Strengths: Smooth transitions.
Good 180 degree angles.
Dark effects.
Weaknesses: Word titles in the wrong places.
Black and white needs to be consistent or not in the film.
New storyboard


These are my updated storyboards. We sat together and discussed the arrangement of the updated trailer taking on board everything that our focus group and our teacher had said to improve. We made the narrative less abstract and re-arranged the order of the clips so that it would be easier to comprehend. This story we felt had more of a narrative however it wasn't linear which is what we wanted. We added in some image of words to flash up so that the audience can follow the trailer almost like a story is being told.
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