These are my updated storyboards. We sat together and discussed the arrangement of the updated trailer taking on board everything that our focus group and our teacher had said to improve. We made the narrative less abstract and re-arranged the order of the clips so that it would be easier to comprehend. This story we felt had more of a narrative however it wasn't linear which is what we wanted. We added in some image of words to flash up so that the audience can follow the trailer almost like a story is being told.
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